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Week 3 - Response Essay Draft-1

Week 3 - Response Essay Draft-1

Q Instructions: • Upload your Response Essay (the same draft from week 3) to this submission area by Tuesday midnight. • After you submit your essay, you will be assigned a partner's paper to review. The date that your peer's paper becomes available is up to your instructor. You can find your partner's paper by checking your To Do list, or by opening this assignment again after Wednesday 3 am and checking the right side of the screen where you will find an Anonymous User submission: Now you are ready to conduct a peer review. 1. Open the peer review area by clicking the Anonymous User link. 2. Click on the "Show Rubric" button in the top right corner of the screen to access the rubric. 3. Click on the blue hyper-linked paper title to read this person's paper. 4. Assign scores on the rubric for each category. 5. Add a comment in a complete sentence to each line of the rubric to explain your score for that category. Use the speech bubble icon below the scoring area to expand the text box. 6. Write something nice in the general comment box to complete the assignment. 7. Click SAVE at the bottom left of the rubric (you will need to scroll down and to the left to find it) to submit the Peer Review. Your review is due by 11:59 PM on Friday. For similar step-by-step instructions on the peer review process (this time with pictures), see the Canvas web page: How do I submit a peer review to an assignment? (Links to an external site.) Please remember that peer review helps the reviewer more than the reviewee. Looking analytically at someone else's writing helps you to be analytical about your own writing. Therefore, instead of thinking that a student also learning about the writing process may not be capable of providing valuable feedback, or that the feedback provided is not what you specifically hoped to receive, think about the fact that reviewing another's work will aid you as a writer, and that the other person fully understands that you too are learning about the writing process. Rubric Response Essay Rubric Response Essay Rubric Criteria Ratings Pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeWrites with clarity and precision: Writing is precise, specific, and uses transitions between ideas. 10 to >9.2 pts Excellent Writing is precise and specific. Has transitions between all ideas 9.2 to >8.6 pts Good Almost all of the writing is precise and specific. Has transitions between most ideas 8.6 to >7.7 pts Proficient The majority of the writing is precise and specific. Majority of ideas have transitions between them 7.7 to >6.5 pts Developing Some of the writing if precise and specific. Some transitions between ideas 6.5 to >0 pts Incomplete Little or none of the writing is precise and specific. Little or no transitions used 10 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeUses correct English grammar, mechanics, and usage: Writing is free from grammar errors, typos, or other minor mistakes. 10 to >9.5 pts Excellent All of the writing is free from errors and typos 9.5 to >8.6 pts Good Almost all of the writing is free from errors and typos 8.6 to >7.7 pts Proficient The majority of the writing is free from errors and typos 7.7 to >6.5 pts Developing Some of the writing is free from errors and typos 6.5 to >0 pts Incomplete Little or none of the writing is free from errors and typos 10 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning Outcome3. Shows competence in writing for a specific purpose: Writing presents a clear thesis statement and fully supports the thesis statement with clear and detailed evidence. ( 30 to >28.0 pts Excellent Has clear thesis statement and mostly supports the thesis statement 28 to >25.8 pts Good Has clear thesis statement and mostly supports the thesis statement 25.8 to >23.0 pts Proficient Thesis statement is mostly effective and is supported with some effective evidence. 23 to >19.5 pts Developing Thesis statement needs more development and/or there is not much evidence to support it. 19.5 to >0 pts Incomplete There is no clear thesis statement and/or little to no evidence 30 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeShows competence in writing for a specific audience Writing addresses audience’s needs by naming article and providing a clear sense of the article’s content 15 to >14.25 pts Excellent Article named and explained 14.25 to >13.0 pts Good Article named and mostly explained. 13 to >11.5 pts Procifient Article named and somewhat explained. 11.5 to >9.75 pts Developing Article not adequately named and/or explained. 9.75 to >0 pts Incomplete Article not named and not explained. 15 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeShows competence in writing for a specific genre: Writing has a clear organization based on the assignment parameters that includes a distinct and complete introduction, body, and conclusion. Transitions used between sections. 30 to >28.0 pts Excellent Clear organization that includes distinct and complete intro, body, and conclusion. Transitions used between all sections 28 to >25.8 pts Good Minor issues with organization. Distinct and complete intro, body, and conclusion. Transitions used between sections. 25.8 to >23.0 pts Proficient Mostly clear organization. Distinct intro, body, and conclusion, but one needs more development. Missing some transitions between sections. 23 to >19.5 pts Developing Organization is not ideal. One section missing and/or two sections underdeveloped. Missing transitions between sections. 19.5 to >0 pts Incomplete Little to no organization, sections missing, and little to no transitions between sections 30 pts This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomePaper Formatting:. APA paper template is used and all APA paper formatting is in place. 5 to >4.75 pts Excellent All paper formatting in place 4.75 to >4.3 pts Good Almost all paper formatting in place 4.3 to >3.85 pts Proficient The majority of paper formatting in place 3.85 to >3.25 pts Developing Some paper formatting in place 3.25 to >0 pts Incomplete Little to no paper formatting in place 5 pts Total Points: 100 PreviousNext

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